Ranking 3 Sample Essays from the Red Reader #3

Out of G for Griselda, H for Helga, and I for Imelda, Imelda barely ranks top dog.  While she does bring up an interesting topic with her introduction her title is completely the wrong choice because only until halfway through the essay does she begin to touch upon that subject.  Her fancy language from her thesaurus keeps us engaged in what she is saying.  The structure though is somewhat lacking complexity, just focusing on mainly one character in each.  I found this essay okay, but I'm a sucker for fancy words so I liked this essay the most.  Griselda now, starts off with a weird titled and just seems very bland from then on.  The essay as well lacks complexity and any lengthy analyzation.  It covers a pretty common subject and doesn't say anything I haven't heard before. zzzzzz.  Helga starts off pretty boring and poorly written in the beginning like Griselda, but does gain a little steam as the essay continues. Thats it. : )